abcbumblebee
Registered: 08/18/09
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chocorob... i find it interesting how u manage to show up on almost every thread bashing stargirl... the 2 books are truly amazing......
ANYWAY, aj since you are a writer and you are only a few months older than me, i would like to ask you about stargirl (sorry a little obsessed  with the books) what are your thoughts on the 2 current books and about a possible 3rd book? obviously he will never read it but im writing a 3rd book that im going to send to mr. spinelli..... heres the summary of what ive got so far:
Archie's dying. he comes to live with the caraways since he has no family to take care of him in arizona... once he's passed away, stargirl finds a letter from Archie telling her where he hid barney in the first book. she finds the scull and the note, written in the note is a location... at the location she finds none other than leo. leo has learned to "erase" himself and devotes his life to becomming starboy. they once again, fall in love.... then perry comes back and expresses his love for stargirl. end of book, just my ideas....?
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aj
Registered: 08/08/08
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I don't think he was bashing them, he just said he hadn't read them...
Hmmm. The plot sounds interesting enough. I do like Leo better than Perry.  But the thing is, how would that cover a entire book? It's a good plot for a short story, but I don't know how long you can pull it out. Also, if you have Perry come, (unlikely, but if you get a good, reasonable explanation) then you'll need to resolve that. He can't just come, announce his love, and then you end it. You'll need to finish that up. Have Stargirl "choose", somehow break it to the unlucky guy. And then, finish it up. Perry would probably feel hurt- or angrey, depending on how you want to write it. And you'd have to deal with that...
But otherwise, it's a good plot, besides dealing with the end. Good luck , and hope that when you finish it, Spinelli will read it.
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ilikeeggs1996
Registered: 01/13/09
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This is quite awkward and everything, but I just want to say that the idea for the 3rd Stargirl that abcbumblebee has is excellent. The mindpower of you two would make the book a great threequel. Just saying. *Awkward awkward...*  
sorry just had 2 say so!
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aj
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Updated ( a little) the begining post...
Thank you, ilikeeggs1996... That wasn't to awkward... Feel free to say you opinion at any time on the forum!
I'm assuming your 13, correct? 1996- you could be 12... But basically (I can never ask anything briefly xD) how old are you?
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